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Work experience, volunteer and extracurricular activities help develop greater skills such as responsibility and values. My work experience in the past two years has been as a field worker, leaving me a lesson of how difficult it is to earn money. I have volunteer in events like the blood drive learning how to help others. Being a member of the associate student body and participating in the schools annual book have taught me how to be a more responsible person. --- I worked three weeks each summer since 2006. Finding how hard it is to harvest grapes for eight hours under the sun. I also felt weak because of the high temperatures, good thing my parents were always there to support me. With also being on your knees to reach the grapes and having to carry baskets full of grapes all day is exhausting. --- Working in the fields made me realized hoe hard it is to earn money. The money I earned was for my own benefit, but at the same time it helped my parents. Every year my parents ad to but clothes for me, but since I started working I bought my own apparel. I learned not to waist my money on unnecessary things. --- In this year’s blood drive I had the opportunity to volunteer helping people that donated blood. My job was to hold the donators hand during the process to give them support. Then walked them to their rest area, until they felt replenish. Even when I was not able to donate, I felt a relief because I was part of an organization that helps save lives. --- My role in the associate student body is of a treasure. I’m responsible for all the funds the senior class gathers; at events such as, car washes and concessions .I have to attend to this events, making sure all the money goes into the senior account. I am also part of the schools annual book. My role in this class is to gather pictures of student’s faculty and staff. --- Picking grapes was a hard experience that helped me value what my parents do for my family. The blood drive made me understand there are different ways to help people. -- My extracurricular activities developed responsibility for the rest of my life|::::|With that kind of grammar, you re not going to University. Jesus. Here, I ll fix it for you. quot;Work experience, volunteer and extracurricular activities help develop greater skills such as responsibility and values. My work experience in the past two years has been as a field worker, leaving me a lesson of how difficult it is to earn money. I have volunteer in events like the blood drive learning how to help others. Being a member of the associate student body and participating in the schools annual book have taught me how to be a more responsible person. --- I worked three weeks each summer since 2006; finding out how hard it is to harvest grapes for eight hours under the sun. I felt weak because of the high temperatures, good thing that my parents were always there to support me. Also, being on your knees to reach the grapes and having to carry baskets full of grapes all day is exhausting. --- Working in the fields made me realized how hard it is to earn money. The money I earned was for my own benefit, but at the same time it helped my parents. Every year my parents had to buy clothes for me, but since I started working I bought my own apparel. I learned not to waste my money on unnecessary things. --- In this year’s blood drive I had the opportunity to volunteer helping people that donated blood. My tasl was to hold the donators hand during the process to give them my support. Then I walked them to their rest area, until they felt replenished enough to leave. Even when I was not able to donate, I felt a relief because I was part of an organization that helps save lives. --- My role in the associate student body is of a treasurer. I’m responsible for all the funds the senior class gathers at events such as the car washes and concessions. I have to attend to these events, making sure all the money goes into the senior account. I am also part of the school s annual book sale. My role in this class is to gather pictures of student’s faculty and staff. --- Picking grapes was a hard experience that helped me value what my parents do for my family. The blood drive made me understand there are different ways to help people. -- My extracurricular activities developed responsibility for the rest of my lifequot;|::::|Work experience, volunteering, and extracurricular activities help develop greater skills such as responsibility and values. My work experience in the past two years has been as a field worker, teaching me how difficult it is to earn money. I have volunteered in events like the blood drive and learning how to help others. Being a member of the associated student body and participating in the schools annual book preparation have taught me how to be a more responsible person. --- I worked three weeks each summer since 2006, finding how hard it is to harvest grapes for eight hours under the sun. I also felt weak because of the high temperatures. It s a good thing my parents were always there to support me. Being on your knees to reach the grapes and having to carry baskets full of grapes all day is exhausting. --- Working in the fields made me realized how hard it is to earn money. The money I earned was for my own benefit, but at the same time it helped my parents. Every year my parents had to buy clothes for me, but since I started working I have bought my own apparel. I learned not to waste my money on unnecessary things. --- In this year’s blood drive I had the opportunity to volunteer helping the people that donated blood. My job was to hold the donor s hand during the process to give them support. Then I walked them to the rest area, until they felt replenished. Even though I was not able to donate, I felt a relief because I was part of an organization that helps save lives. --- My position in the associated student body is treasurer. I’m responsible for all the funds the senior class gathers at events such as car washes and concessions .I have to attend these events, making sure all the money goes into the senior account. I am also part of the school s annual book preparation. My role in this class is to gather pictures of the students, faculty, and staff. --- Picking grapes was a hard experience that helped me value what my parents do for my family. The blood drive made me understand there are different ways to help people. -- My extracurricular activities have developed responsibility for the rest of my life (Hope this helps......)