Comments On My Poem About Acceptance As You Are? -

My life is not perfect My esteem not always high I make mistakes But I always try I give my all Work just as hard as the rest No one can ever say She did not give her best My finances are not stable That has always been a problem for you I think you forget What it is I do Up in the morning 4:30 AM sharp I hit the ground running Not a moment to stop My children are well cared for Then taken to school I then go to work Well aware and hardly fooled I am an honest lady A woman of meager means But I earn my money the hard way Not on my back or on my knees I don t drink or smoke My resources are bare But I thought you understood that I thought you cared I wanted you here You wanted me there We are under the same moon But you are no where near My life is not perfect But GOD willing soon Along will come a man Who will stand next to me Under the moon|::::|Hey thanks for sharing that, this is a good place to express yourself. Writing after emotionally turbulent times is a good exercise. Get some of those intangible thoughts into some manageable pieces, it is often when we first try amp; verbalise or story, we realise how scatted our thoughts have become. That was lovely, the silly man is missing out on wealth he cannot recognise. No you are not looking for a rescuer, you are not a victim. You have a place for a hand to hold amp; someone to trust amp; to share life s experiences.|::::|I was a mother of 2 I gave the third up for adoption because of her lunatic dad and then when all was down in my life, God sent a man who had 3 of his own. We merged the family and raised 5 our own and happiness continues on these past 18 years. When you least expect it, the right one walks in. Great write! Keep sharing!|::::|Beautiful words just like you a beautiful person. Your special person is out there looking for you right now be patient you will be in his arms before you know it. Leave it to God he will guide you through your heart just listen to God and your heart.|::::|You wrote this from the heart...it sounds like my life. You should consider writing as a way of releasing your pain. I think you have to let go of your insecurities and focus on the positive. For one you have a gift of writing,you should try to get yourself published sister.|::::|Beautiful amp; powerful|::::|I understand how you feel.|::::|I can completely relate to this on so many levels. You spoke the way I feel in this one! Bravo!|::::|Very nice.. lots of pain and very personal SteveC|::::|I like your writing. As I said before you write naturally like someone would be thinking or talking. But the best part is you write on themes everyone can relate to. Before my husband Joe I struggled as a single parent foster parent. Alot of your days in the poem sound like my days as a single foster Mom. It was good and honest but I wanted a special man to share it with. And some days if I stopped to think about if one of my supports or friends failed me how it could be so difficult, but God got me through! Thanks for sharing and keep on writing and sharing!!! You could get published, but for now I believe you are the Y!A Poet Laureate! :)|::::|This poem is about a few themes one of them acceptance or accepting. Life is not about being perfect every day a person should do the best they can There will be days that will be better than others. It deals with family because there are children involved The children will learn very well from you because you are honest don t drink or smoke However there is one person that caused you much needless pain making promises not keeping them There should have been someone else making money so you can be with your children|::::|It s too negative. To accept yourself as you are you need to approve of yourself and love yourself unconditionally. Your entire poem is about all the things wrong with you and how only a man will save you from yourself. It s a very sad poem.