Does this personals post sound reasonable? Iamp;#39;m about to put this up.? -

So does this sound reasonable, or do I come across as an idealist jack-***? Whats up everyone. Weird that I m posting here, but anyways, here s the 411 on me: I m a 23 year old guy who recently graduated from an Ivy business school. My company from NYC recently promoted me to a VP and sent me down to operate their Baltimore branch. This is my first time living here. I ll be moving down starting January. I m intelligent, fun, easy going, loves to party, loves warm companionship, used to do some modeling. I walk fast, am extremely ambitious, always in the middle of doing something, always wanting more, and I don t stop there. Life is just one big joyride, there is always something at the side of the road - always something more - whats better than driving 400mph through life with someone you really love? I have to work from 6am all the way to 10pm - which then I come home really quick, dress up, and go back out and hit the clubs and bars. Well, I m looking for a girlfriend to do that with. But I am basically fed up with the risk of STDs, gold-diggers, psycho women, over-rated dating scene, and the kinds of drama that seeing more than one girl creates. Also, most girls I meet don t have the same career schedule as me, and it s hard to have a proper relationship when I work 80 hours a week and she works only 40 and is bored at home. So this is where you come in! I am looking for a girl to go along for the ride with me, but I promise it will be YOU, and YOU only! I am looking for a girl with the following characteristics (you don t have to hit all of these): - Age Range: 21 - 29 - Intelligent - Witty and very sarcastic sense of humor - BUBBLY PERSONALITY (big points!!!) - LOVES TO DANCE (and grind) - I prefer Clubs to Bars and dancing it off with a hot woman (especially one that you re romantically attracted to) right after a stressful day at work really makes life THAT much better. - Classy, has great sense of style - High-powered career (unless you re in med school in which case you won t have a career yet) - Salary range from 60k+ (this is to weed out the gold-diggers. Sorry, I m just SICK of them) - Body has to be fit. A bit of flab is actually hot, but I just want you to be fit, because I sure as hell am! - LOVES to party and have a fun night out, and enjoy our high-powered yuppie lives and knows how to properly enjoy our hard-earned money. Most women I meet in nightclubs and bars are just that: women in nightclubs and bars. None of them are really educated and they really don t make good girlfriend material. It is EXTREMELY hard to find an intelligent AND outgoing girl who loves to party, and who isn t a total ditzz or a whore. If you re out there, hit me up. What I have in mind, besides the whole partying and clubbing partner, is also a potential relationship (it s about time I got into a committed relationship!)|::::|generally it sounds fine to me. i noticed that you use a lot of extreme emotions on your profile. i would suggest toning down all of the CAPS because it makes it look like you are trying to say LOOK AT THIS IT IS IN CAPS AND IS IMPORTANT. Also, i would take out everything about categorizing girls as ditzs and whores. even though women call each other that, coming from a guy it won t get you any dates.|::::|Honestly, you sound extremely full of yourself. With comments about being sure as hell hot and the gold-diggers etc. It s great that you work hard and have a full schedule, but it seems that you only want a girlfriend to go clubbing with you, not one to care for in a committed relationship. Talk about positive qualities in that you re looking for, not negative ones that you don t want. Revise it, shorten it, and take this out: Most women I meet in nightclubs and bars are just that: women in nightclubs and bars. None of them are really educated and they really don t make good girlfriend material. It is EXTREMELY hard to find an intelligent AND outgoing girl who loves to party, and who isn t a total ditzz or a whore.