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Cause all I do is yearn a life without a concern And dream of having a turn to earn money to burn Mapping out my strategies to get rich huh My desire is like a scratch that needs to get itched huh Cause man I live in the D, this **** ain t given for free Nothing s different to me, so what, it s easy to see I ll be the prisoner to flee, all of this misery I m not wishing to be another fish in the sea But just an MC, so listen to me, but if you disagree You missing the key, you ain t even in the brisk of the tea Unconditionally my aspects to cash checks My objects were never to swab decks It s up to you the decision is yours If what you vision is tours, or a mission less course When **** is in the stores, cause you can be a star|::::|i like it. could be tighten up a bit tho. rewrite it so it flows more smoothly. i give it a high six|::::|I tried to rap it myself and it became obvious that you are trying to make it rhyme too much, let up on the rhyming and work on the flow, oftentimes that which looks good on paper will cause you to put your foot in your mouth.|::::|sure it rhymes, but some of it doesn t make sense. quot;you ain t even in the brisk of the teaquot; quot;my aspects to cash checksquot; those don t make any sense.